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He left wine on the tremors of my lips. Red blush bleeding across burnished skin. A curious up turn whispering whimsy and wonderings into stolen silence.

My eyelids flutter, a scattering of dreams upon the breeze gasped from rosé stained flesh.  He inhales them, treasures them in deep blue irises of sea. It’s not your innocence, he whispers.

But it’s enough.
©2008-2009 ~Centrau-Guardian
:iconcentrau-guardian:

Author's Comments

Raindrops on roses and the girls in white dresses
And the sleeping with the roaches and the taking best guesses
At the shade of the sheets before all the stains
And a few more of your least favorite things

Inside, what a wonderful caricature of intimacy
Inside, what a wonderful caricature of intimacy

- Build God, Then We'll Talk - P!ATD

I don't know. I just don't know.

"You taste like wine. Inebriation confined in flesh."
- A moment of whimsy.

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:iconoasispegasus:
Great as always.

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Equestrian photography and Traditional art. :floating:
:iconcentrau-guardian:
Thanks. Wish I had even a hint of a clue where it came from. It left me dreaming more, but I can't capture the words; they just spread butterfly painted wings and tease life into being that seems a whole world away.

I'm confused.

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-CG out.

A Day without laughter is a day wasted. - e.e. cummings
:iconoasispegasus:
Think about what's making you confused and target where it came from. If it doesnt bring answer's, im sure it will create more beautiful prose.

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Equestrian photography and Traditional art. :floating:
:iconstacynina:
It sounds like could be a much more sinister reasoning from the other character in this one XD although this is just great in general, I love your writing :3

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"Uke" rootin for the underdog!
:iconcentrau-guardian:
Yup, I wasn't sure exactly what kind of tone this had... I think it's meant to be interpreted by the reader!

Thank you hon! *hug*

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-CG out.

A Day without laughter is a day wasted. - e.e. cummings
:iconstacynina:
Thanks for sharing Kirsty :P <3

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"Uke" rootin for the underdog!

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